能否批改一下我写的这篇考研英语作文？

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• 王同学
  帮我写一篇英语作文吧，谢谢啦！
  • 孙老师
    oil tax reform
    
    january 1 refined oil prices since the implementation of tax reform oil prices did not increase but the various sectors of the reform program has been mixed. embody the oil tax reform and more and more tax reform of taxes and fees for oil prices after the implementation of the impact we think it is more reasonable oil prices the additional fuel tax and the abolition of the maintenance fee was basically the same the cost of keeping a car impact great.
    
    reform program has given full consideration to the interests of all parties especially the countries from january 1 to lower gas prices ahead of schedule to implement but also highlights the principle of giving benefits to the people. the oil tax reform reflects the "multi-fuel multi-tax less fuel and less tax" the principle of a fair tax burden will be beneficial to society as a whole energy-saving awareness of emission reduction.
    
    transport enterprises of "worries" under the current situation in the finished oil tax reform a more reasonable timing. passenger motor vehicle industry refined oil tax reform is a good thing. oil tax reform before the introduction of no. 0 diesel price to 6.03 yuan a liter but also to pay road maintenance fees and other costs. but tax and fee reform road maintenance passenger surcharge transported tube is not only not have to pay fees and oil prices also dropped to 4.88 yuan per liter. which is not difficult to see enterprise burden indeed a substantial margin.
    
    however due to uncertainty over oil prices road transport enterprises to implement tax reform finished oil prices have the potential concerns and that is changing oil prices. if the current 4.88 yuan per liter for diesel prices to adapt to the international oil price of 47 u.s. dollars a barrel standard then if international oil prices rose to 94 u.s. dollars domestic oil prices if it will be doubled if so the pressure of the passenger business is unbearable.
    
    in addition the implementation of tax and fee reform the secondary road charges will be withdrawn in an orderly manner but "orderly withdrawal" is how a concept or make it difficult to understand. on the current situation in the province highway fees or very common many secondary roads toll stations have not yet withdrawn.
    
    仅供参考，请自借鉴
• J同学
  帮写一篇英语作文50字左右
  • 王老师
    my name is selina. i am a 14 year old student.everyday i have dinner at 6.30 pm . i go to bed at 10.30 pm after finishing my homework .my favorite subjects is music english and pe.i can dance and sing . after class i like to watch some comedy films. august 8st is my birthday. i wants to see a funny movie with friends to celebrate my birthday.我叫瑟琳娜，我是一名十四岁的学生 我每天下午六点半吃晚饭 写完作业后十点半睡觉 我最喜欢的科目是音乐英语和体育课。我能跳舞唱歌。下课后我喜欢看喜剧电影。8月8号是我的生日，我想要和朋友一起去看喜剧电影来庆祝生日。
• G同学
  求一篇用英语写的作文《服装店的广告》
  • 谢老师
    come to guangming clothes store 快来光明服装店！
    our clothes are on sale . 我们的衣服正在大减价。
    we sell pants for only 30 yuan. 我们卖的裤子只要30元。
    do you like white bag 你喜欢白色的包吗？
    it's only 15 yuan. 只要15元。
    we have beautiful black hats for only 12 yuan each. 我们有漂亮的黑色帽子只要12元一顶。
    do you like sweaters in red green blue and orange 你喜欢红色、绿色、蓝色和橙色的毛衣吗？
    you can buy it for only 20 yuan. 你能以20元的价格买到它。
    come and see for yourself at guangming clothes store. 亲自来光明服装店看一看吧。