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• C同学
  英语考研作文话题模板
  • 谭老师
    (1)as is vividly depicted in the picture(描述图画).(2) the most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)there is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
    第二自然段重点论述主题，第一句可以用一个有爆发力的主题句阐释主题的重要性。第二句谈这个现象的永恒的社会意义可以用一个排比句说明只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断征服挑战和竞争并最后走向成功。第三句可以是具体的例子谈根据一项调查表明这个积极的现象对人有利。第四句可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象人们生活就忧闷有挫折感无前进动力前途渺茫。第五句作总结，谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者。
    (1)as is symbolically depicted/shown in the set of drawings the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that 主题 is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)undoubtedly it is 主题 that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulties that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for success. (3) according to a survey made by china daily 与主题相关的好的后果.(4)if 不这样的话 we will live a dull and depressing life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (5)only by 主题 can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society。
    第三段为结束段落，总结全文内容并提出建议。首句可以说无论做大事还是小事无论做难事还是容易事都要这个积极现象。第二个句子谈建议让它变的更好。第三个句子谈让它变的更好的方法通常发挥它的好处避免坏处。第四句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好丰富和有活力的未来。
    (1)from the above analysis it can be safely concluded that in doing things whether great or small 主题is indispensable on the way to success. (2)it is therefore necessary that some effective measures are taken to make 主题more efficient. (3)on one hand we should raise our awareness of its significance of 主题. on the other hand 不这样的现象应该批评. (4)only with主题 can we embrace a glorious future.
• 丹同学
  英语语言文学考研都考些什么科目
  • 熊老师
    初试科目 ①101政治 ②226二外(俄语)或227二外(日语)或228二外(德语)或229二外(法语) ③611英语实践 ④813英语专业基础及综合(英语语言学、英美文学、英美概况、现代汉语及中国现当代文学基础) 复试备注 除亚非语言文学外不招跨专业考生 复试科目英语语言学与英美文学基础
• 暗同学
  高考英语作文套路及优美语句
  • 侯老师
    .one is always on a strange road watching strange scenery and listening to strange music. then one day you will find that the things you try hard to forget are already gone.
    一个人总要走陌生的路，看陌生的风景，听陌生的歌，然后在某个不经意的瞬间，你会发现，原本是费尽心机想要忘记的事情真的就那么忘记了。
    
    2.happiness is not about being immortal nor having food or rights in one's hand. it’s about having each tiny wish come true or having something to eat when you are hungry or having someone's love when you need love.
    幸福，不是长生不老，不是大鱼大肉，不是权倾朝野。幸福是每一个微小的生活愿望达成。当你想吃的时候有得吃，想被爱的时候有人来爱你。
    　　
    3.love is a lamp while friendship is the shadow. when the lamp is offyou will find the shadow everywhere. friend is who can give you strength at last. 　
    爱情是灯，友情是影子，当灯灭了，你会发现你的周围都是影子。朋友，是在最后可以给你力量的人。　
    
    4.i love you not for who you are but for who i am before you.
    我爱你不是因为你是谁，而是我在你面前可以是谁。
    
    5.love makes man grow up or sink down. 　
    爱情，要么让人成熟，要么让人堕落。　
    
    6.if you can hold something up and put it down it is called weight-lifting if you can hold something up but can never put it downit's called burden-bearing. pitifully most of people are bearing heavy burdens when they are in love. 　
    举得起放得下的叫举重，举得起放不下的叫负重。可惜，大多数人的爱情，都是负重的。
    
    7.we all live in the past. we take a minute to know someone one hour to like someone and one day to love someone but the whole life to forget someone.
    我们每个人都生活在各自的过去中，人们会用一分钟的时间去认识一个人，用一小时的时间去喜欢一个人，再用一天的时间去爱上一个人，到最后呢，却要用一辈子的时间去忘记一个人。
    
    8.one may fall in love with many people during the lifetime. when you finally get your own happiness you will understand the previous sadness is kind of treasure which makes you better to hold and cherishthe people you love. 　　
    一个人一生可以爱上很多的人，等你获得真正属于你的幸福之后，你就会明白一起的伤痛其实是一种财富，它让你学会更好地去把握和珍惜你爱的人。