能否批改一习我写的2015年考研英语二小作文？

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• 百同学
  英语零基础怎么学习考研英语作文
  • 彭老师
    英语作文的提高其实和大家平时的积累息息相关。在平时多背一些经典词句段落，可能在写作的时候不太能够想起来，但是确实是积累了语感，对写作也是很有帮助的。尤其是考试时候的英语作文，其实卷面的整洁与否真的很重要。大多数人其实在考试时的发挥都差不多，如果你的作文比较整洁，文字清晰，必然会让改卷老师产生好印象，作文得分也能够相对提高。
• 부同学
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  • 张老师
    we can't have good luck foreverso learning how to face difficulities is important.some people feel upset when they meet difficulitiesand they don't want to try to let their dreams come ture anymore.they just want to find a place and stay at there for a long time.so they won't have a great success in the end.but others are differentsome people don't think difficulities are troublesthey believe " difficulities is the mother of the success''and"believe in myself and i will win ''they are confident and breaveand they choose to face the difficulities with a smile.they try their best to solve their problems and if they don't feel wellthey'll talk to their friends or family membersso that they can be happier and more confident.and they don't mind what others say about themthey can always find a good way for themselves to relax.
    
    
    i think if you can have a good psychology when you meet difficulities in your lifeand be more confident and breave try to find a good way to relaxmaybe talk to others or have a restand then think it overmake a plan to solve your problems.if you do so you'll find that your difficulities are not as difficult as you think before